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Dyzvhtynzal

Dyzvhtynzal

Kombatant
Got a new idea for my story and was wondering what all of you think. The main characters so far are Bombyss and Boomyxi. They were born out of eggs attached to the ceiling of an underworld where the Zursha reside. As the eggs grow, they become heavier until they fall and crack open. Out come Bombyss and her sister. But they are born looking old. They physically age in reverse. After the Zursha accelerate their age until they're 25ish, the story starts. Sound stupid? I'm not sure if I should explain this early by revising my prologue, or introduce it as the story unfolds? I guess nobody has any new writing to check out?
 
Dyzvhtynzal

Dyzvhtynzal

Kombatant
Should have named thread For Those Who Like Pictures lol. I always liked taking my ideas to games too. MTV Music Generator, and Tenchu 2 were my faves. Game editors are great. But you made your stuff a different way, didn't you?
 
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Ththuvhul said:
Should have named thread For Those Who Like Pictures lol. I always liked taking my ideas to games too. MTV Music Generator, and Tenchu 2 were my faves. Game editors are great. But you made your stuff a different way, didn't you?
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in the wwe games they give you create a wrestler, logo, arena finishers, enterances and movesets


this is how i get creative and the only reason why i still invest in that franchise. if it didnt have all those creating modes i wouldve dropped it years ago
 
Dyzvhtynzal

Dyzvhtynzal

Kombatant
Not that anyone gives a fuck, but, the Zursha create consciousness, by leaving the underworld. Motivated by a desire to create, they skip stones across the mighty river Razzagur. (Wait, there's more)The stones skip and curl round on the river bottom where they're taken to waterfalls. (The Razzagur splits into a short, wide branch, and a longer, narrower one.) Anyway, the circular rocks fall and float up to the top of lakes where they turn into eggs and are taken to the underworld until they grow fat, fall, and crack open.
 
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been awile since i replied. came up with a actress who should play ms marvel for marvel film


emilia clarke from a game of thrones




 
Zoidberg747

Zoidberg747

My blades will find your heart
I've had this idea in my head about doing a series of short stories about two dudes hunting demons, just havent gotten around to writing it yet. Almost wrote the first one in my head lol
 
True Grave

True Grave

Giving The Gift Of Graves
I used to write poetry when I was younger. Not so much now. I still have all my material tho. A lot of it was when I went through a very dark period in my youth at age 12 so some talk about being depressed. As I got older tho, they became very dark and after reading them now at 24, some of the things I said strike very similar to global and social events of today.

EDIT: I'm also a very heavy reader. Lengthy books that are fulfilling such as The Secret Teachings of All Ages by Manly P. Hall

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Dyzvhtynzal

Dyzvhtynzal

Kombatant
I read Chapter 1. I enjoyed it. It already tells me what my own stuff lacks. I usually give character info shreds at a time, if at all. Instead of describing characters I'd rather let a reader construct the individual. I'm more concerned about interesting dialogue, something, sadly my work lacks. My characters seem to have the same attitudes and temperment. Been workin on that though.
 
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