These are lovely. The Edenians have always been my favorite characters, and the cycles of tragedy and betrayal -- of Sindel and Jerrod, of Kitana and Mileena, of Jade and Tanya -- are part of what makes their story powerful.
The handle he has on Kitana as a character feels very real, and it's obvious how long he's been a fan -- all the classic references are really nice easter eggs. His character designs are excellent, too.
No game's story has ever really tackled that Kitana is a truly ancient being, 10,000 years old, and I love how he has that inform her character in the MK9 comics -- and the way she interacts with both Liu Kang and Mileena in particular.
The post-MKX comics are really clever, and would be a neat way for the story to go. I really hope we see Kitana restored to herself in the MK11 story, because the revenant version is just not that interesting to me. I love how he writes Tanya in the fourth one, too!
Some of the best fanart I've seen -- really solid.