Feedback on an FGC article

[TerribleBaraka]

Hey all,

I'll keep this quick. Just want to get any feedback on an article I wrote about the fighting game community. Mainly the feeling of where I might have got information wrong and have incorrectly portrayed things I don't know enough about.

The link is:

http://jameslaternman.com/w/nonfiction/the-arcade-spirit-lives-in-fighting-games

For anyone who has the time to read it and get back to me, it would be greatly appreciated.

Cheers,

James

 

[TerribleBaraka]

(skip the first 7 paragraphs to get to relevant parts)

 

[Juggs]

Kinda hard to read bro.

 

[Euphoric]

First rule to writing is use the standard font for all literature. Which is Times New Roman.

 

[TerribleBaraka]

Fixed.

 

[Zoidberg747]

I liked it

 

[TerribleBaraka]

Thanks Zoidberg. Any places where the information doesn't jibe with the reality of the fighting game culture would be much appreicated.

 

[TerribleBaraka]

And should say, apologies for sending the link out to a page with bad formatting. The typography did look great in the latest browsers, but I was a bit bleeding edge with my CSS (the site is essentially just a holding place). Should be readable in all browsers now. Really appreciate any feedback, thanks guys.