Good overall tips. Would have helped me if I was learning the guy.
A few things though, after a MB HM, it might be best to do B3, J3, D3 instead of B3, J2, 112 torpedo. It ends with a D3 so you get those set ups rolling again.
And the 22 HM and AC isn't a true mix up because your opponent can backdash and escape both. In that event, the true mix up is 22 AT or 22 HM.