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  1. Dyzvhtynzal

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    Hey, Toonen, I hope you are doing well. I read your statement and learned the definition of a new word - kakistocracy. Lol. Pretty cool. Seriously, though. I'm looking for serious critiques of my work and will give constructive criticism to anything posted here. If you're interested, show us...
  2. Dyzvhtynzal

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    I'm still here. And still writing. Does anyone want to share a story he/she recently wrote?
  3. Dyzvhtynzal

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    I played a little of Walter. Pretty cool, but a bit tricky to learn.
  4. Dyzvhtynzal

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    I would love to do what you're doing, though.
  5. Dyzvhtynzal

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    Lol. I clicked on Walter and already have a similar idea in mind. A virus that can destroy the world. Except the main bad guy is on an island. Maybe I'll attach what I started, see what you think.
  6. Dyzvhtynzal

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    I'm trying to do a choose your own adventure thing after I finish my current piece. ILL check out your story when I get a chance.
  7. Dyzvhtynzal

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    I'm still here. Who has some new writing? I finished three lengthy pieces over the last year.
  8. Dyzvhtynzal

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    @trufenix I read your piece. It's an interesting but difficult read because of grammar, punctuation, and POV issues. The content didnt seem to be focused, but it was entertaining.
  9. Dyzvhtynzal

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    I'll read this now
  10. Dyzvhtynzal

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    Hey there. I self published a novel when I was at a weaker writing strength (back in 2012) and regret it. I regret it because it needed more work. I shouldn't have tried to self-publish. I should have sought a literary agent and developed a good query letter/background, etc. Since then, I have...
  11. Dyzvhtynzal

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    Goo luck. I'll check it out. I always thought my work would be better suited for comic books or film. Keep writing.
  12. Dyzvhtynzal

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    Na. You can do it.
  13. Dyzvhtynzal

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    Anybody write anything lately? My latest work is taking longer than expected because I'm using real world locations and people and have to do more research than I thought. Anyway, keep writing.
  14. Dyzvhtynzal

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    Nice poem, Caleb Hara. VSlayer, put your story out for us to see.
  15. Dyzvhtynzal

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    Anybody write anything lately? I'm on Chapter 11 of my latest work. Working hard on it. Let me know what you're working on.
  16. Dyzvhtynzal

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    @Jynks Ok. Thanks. The writing is being told by one person, but switches to past events as if they were happening now or in real time. Why is ... A no no. It just indicates a pause. As for adjectives and adverbs, i think they too many people believe they're bad because they were told so too...
  17. Dyzvhtynzal

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    Anybody check out my story? I need to know what is good or bad about it. Trying to make something unique.
  18. Dyzvhtynzal

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    Cant get cipher to load. Anyway, i'll leave story up for 2 weeks then pull it down.
  19. Dyzvhtynzal

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    Cypher ended up being 1848 unique symbols. If i ever became a murderer, i'd embarass the Zodiac killer. When i get a chance to scan it, maybe i'll throw it at you guys. The binary code part is too easy.
  20. Dyzvhtynzal

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    How's everyone's writing coming along? For one part of my latest tale I converted a Spenserian sonnet i made into binary code, and am trying to finish a cypher that relies on a formula to decipher. Taking up lots of my writing time.